28 Days of Unreason, day 2 prompt:
“That morning the sun forgot to rise….” – Jim Harrison
he turned off the trail
no birds accompanied him
Basho breathed no more
Jill at Jillys2016 is revisiting a 28-day prompt-fest she calls “Days of Unreason.” The name comes from a book of poetry called, “Songs of Unreason,” by Jim Harrison. If you have never read any of his work, you’re missing out! An author and a poet, Harrison lived… or at least wrote… on a totally different plane. Possibly a different planet. “I can’t walk in the shoes cobbled for me. They weren’t devised by poets, but by shoemakers.”
Perfect! This is a truly outstanding Haiku and your take on the Harrison quote is spot-on. Basho would approve 🙂 Keep on rocking the form, Charley!
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Arigatou gozaimasu, Jill-san! 🙂
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Dōitashimashite
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Wonderful !
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Thank you!
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‘he turned off the trail’ – a nice way of describing death, Charley. Sad without birds.
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It would have saddened him immensely. I hope you approve.
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Lovely post 😊
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Thank you very much!
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