“In this world of dreams don’t let the clock cut up your life in pieces.” — Jim Harrison
I
The cardinals who set up housekeeping
in our live oak — the one on the left —
woke me singing the sun up today.
II
Little Bear woke up the women
of the camp singing the sun up.
For his efforts he was given the chore
of bringing water to each family.
III
Life soars on sacred wings
high above the dreams at which we labor
in spirals not segmented by the sun;
the sun is not disjointed as it passes.
The moon of madness slices with time.
That is why we howl at her in pain.
IV
The mockingbird sings sunset on the lamp.
He is not on the clock; he sings dreams
and chases the hawk of time
far from his brooding nest.
∞∞∞
This is part of “28 Days of Unreason” back in 2016
based on prompts taken from poems by Jim Harrison.
Jilly had offered the challenge and I bit like a lake trout!
I’m posting it tonight for dVerse Poets Pub Open Link.
Glad you are joining in with Unreason! Especially love #3.
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A year and some change later, I still love #3 – the howling in pain is vivid. Of course, the mockingbird brings this back full cirlce to sunset, and so we measure our ‘time’ by the rotation of the Earth, rather than the clock.
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Exactly… when we’re allowed to. And it seems we both posted poems about types of “clocks” inadvertently. Glad you enjoyed it!
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AH! So we did. GMTA 🙂
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🙂
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Wonderful piece, Charley! I love, “The moon of madness slices with time.”
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Thank you! Writing from Jim Harrison’s prompts always brings out wild imaginative poems. Lots of fun.
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The last one is really amazing, chasing the hawk of time. I don’t think we can ever really catch time as I believe time is now. I do love the image of that hawk trying though.
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Thank you! I really have enjoyed both times I’ve written using Jim Harrison quotes as prompts. He leads the mind into far away and strange places! Glad you came along.
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As others, lots of wild wonderful imagery here – the mockingbird ‘not on the clock’ – is a fine turn – and ‘Life soars on sacred wings…in spirals not segmented by the sun’ – is another. As I’m reading this, outside a squadron of pelicans are spiralling up into the blue on the afternoon thermals – I think they’d agree.
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All birds know they’re off the clock! We should all be freed to soar on our own time. Thank you for stopping by! Glad you enjoyed the poem.
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A wonderful set showing that the sum of good is greater than it’s part. The last one especially was a true gem
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Thank you, Bjorn!
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We don’t get cardinals over here, so I had to go to the world wide web to find a recording and they sound tropical, like big, fat drops of dew or early morning rain! Telling the time by birds is wonderful, especially:
‘The mockingbird sings sunset on the lamp.
He is not on the clock; he sings dreams
and chases the hawk of time
far from his brooding nest’.
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Cardinals actually hold the record for being the state bird of more states than any other (bird). They are almost a feathered weed. They have several songs. The absolute best time to see them is in the winter… perched alongside a Blue Jay. Of course, that would mean going somewhere where winter happens… and that’s just not going to happen. I’m so glad you enjoyed it!
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The imagery in these scenes is sublime!
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Thank you! High praise coming from you.
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Well deserved 🙂
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Thank you!
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🙂
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Life soars on sacred wings
high above the dreams at which we labor
in spirals not segmented by the sun
I love this so much!!❤️
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Oh, thank you! My mind was soar from the prompt. …and possibly caffeine.
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Very nice! I liked “singing the sun up” and Little Bear getting those chores for doing so and the sacred wings above our dreams.
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Thank you, Frank! Little Bear was a story I was told a long time ago, supposedly true, by a native American.
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What wonderful vignettes of the sun, chock full of delightful phrases. I ENJOYED!
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Thank you very much! I’m pleased it pleased.
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I love this perspective of time. I have a very hard time with it lately. Learning slowly how it really hinders me.
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Despite what the Stones sang, time is not on our side. It gets in the way of our natural rhythms. Glad you enjoyed my offering.
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