I am the tiny finch who fills the air with song at dawn.
I am the bronze of sun on snow-capped hills.
I am the play of wind upon the leafy ash.
I am the ocean’s waves caressing sand and shells.
I am the youthful fool—reckless, full of joy.
I am the ache of old ones shuttered in the dark.
I sing in many voices dawn and dusk that man ignores.
I bring the beauty forth in nature’s palates pure.
I breathe comfort that cools the heat or melts the snow.
I rock oceans deep, the stormy crash or gentle lull.
I energize the heated youth who sings out praise.
I agitate the longing for a final rest, a rescue home.
Victoria Slotto posted Who Am I, You Ask (the first half of the poem above) as a part of Jill’s Casting Bricks July challenge. I, for my part, simply took the measure of this poem — as a reader, reading it through my own set of filters — and headed off in the direction I thought it might be going. The fun in this challenge is that no two people (and especially two poets) are going to see a poem the same way. That’s my take. Read the explanation about how this challenge came about on Jilly’s site.
Charley, I love, love, love this. I love the shift from being (I am) to doing. After all, we are made of both. I hadn’t thought of this but it is superb. Definitely completes the poem.
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Thank you! I started by answering the question your title posed and went from there. I am plays into it.
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Your first line – I sing in many voices dawn and dusk that man ignores – reminds me of how I will stop to gaze on the beauty of a sunrise or sunset and realize that everyone around me is oblivious to the beauty. I see that in your photos. This has the feel of a self-proclamation; profound last line. Beautiful work!
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Thank you, Jill!
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You did well here Charley of Lifeinportofino! Very well.
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Thank you! Feel free to go with just Charley… or “life.” No need to be so formal. 🙂
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I wasn’t being ‘formal’ I was being ‘impressed’! – therefore a seeming seriousness. Which it was . 🙂
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Thank you!
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https://pviljoen.wordpress.com/2017/07/08/song/
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