A fear deeper than the coming of a blizzard. Immobility. Loss of power – electricity. Trees would come down. Lines would be down.
The rain that freezes on contact.
Behind our house hung the muddle. Electric power lines and telephone lines for several different houses all brought together on one pole. Itself an amazement of “engineering.” Four fully-grown trees bunched together, crocheted into the tangle. Huge limbs intertwined with life-giving wires.
A sub-freezing drenching.
A crack. A pop. Darkness. Thank God for cell phones.
Men, hard-weathered by years of this kind of work. Eyes that had seen everything. Each one, in essence, muttering something like, “What the hell…?”
Nature assaults here
too hard to run on glare ice
move south – ice in drinks
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dVerse – Poets Pub Haibun Monday: 50 Shades of Rain
Okay, so I’m a day late….
The challenge is to write a hiabun on one of the fifty Japanese names for rain.
It sparked something this morning, so I followed the muse.
https://dversepoets.com/2016/06/20/haibun-monday-50-shades-of-rain/
Surely not a rain with which to reckon! We get our share in the winters here. No beauty in such danger!. But much in your words, Charley!
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Thank you! The big danger was in the neglect of the infrastructure. Glad to be equator-ward!
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Nicely written! 🙂
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Thank you!
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You’re welcome! 🙂
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I think I know that kind of weather… hopefully we can take it unskidding… (and save some ice for the drinks)
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I know that sort of weather! I spent a winter in Montreal years ago, and you could see the air freeze right before your eyes. Extraordinary thing. Exceptional poem, Charley.
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Thank you very much!
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Ice storms are so dangerous but (if you’re safe inside) so beautiful. Reminds me of winter when I lived in the Jura (the French Alps).
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I prefer the storms we get here in central Florida… no scraping, no shoveling, no shivering! I’m glad you enjoyed it!
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Ha! The last line of your haiku made me laugh aloud. 😉
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What? Ice must know its place! Glad you laughed.
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Freezing rain is the worst. Nice halibun. 🙂
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Thank you!
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I could hear the cracks and feel the tension! Very good!
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Thank you!
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You’re welcome!
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An ice storm is so spooky! There is usually a stillness in the cold air and that stillness is broken by snapping sounds, like gunfire. I, too, am glad to be too far south for such rain as that! Love what you did with the prompt 🙂
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Thank you!
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A drama, a prose-poem, and a touch of humour in the closing verse – I enjoyed it all.
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Thank you! I’m glad when I can enjoy freezing events… on my media!
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I can’t wait until I’m retired when ice storms will simply be amazing photo ops. Driving in them is..well…another word. Your first line is so true in my experience…I would rather drive in a blizzard then try to steer a car on ice, though both make me cringe. Enjoy that sunshine!
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I always do! I drove I-80 through WY, west to east on ice. Not a problem. Nothing to worry about hitting except maybe an intrepid jack rabbit.
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