“There is no such thing as luck; there is only adequate or inadequate preparation to cope with a statistical universe.” — Robert A. Heinlein
They watch and they wait. They are waiting for the time when you slip up. From the darkened hulks of damaged civilization, they eagerly hunt, sniff for the weakness they presume you’ll one day show.
You appear young; that’s what trips up their hopeful lust. They are sure you are a neophyte. Untried? Untrue.
It is that unspoken surprise the Fell left you with — the seed you carry in your core — that makes you appear unaged. You will die looking so. Anyone who tries you will share that seed. The seed of the Fell… parasites of the universe. Although you are strong and versed in personal tactics, you are also being hollowed out by an enemy that came with the unseen ships and the madness that destroyed civilization. The Fell are a… “a cancer.” It’s best to think of it that way.
That said, while it’s true your days are passing fast, what lives inside you gives you a strength, a quickness, an alertness — a prowess! — that those who dwell in the shadows cannot overcome.
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For the March Speculative Fiction Challenge, at D. Wallace Peach / Myths of the Mirror.
This is fabulous! I love the worldbuilding and, wow, does it make me want more! Thanks so much for taking up the prompt. I can’t wait to share this.
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Thank you! I grew up reading this kind of thing, so I do it fairly naturally. The image was the key. Thank you for the prompt!
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You write beautiful poetry. I’m looking forward to reading more. 🙂
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Thank you!
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I like this very much. Is it better to burn or rust?
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I’m glad you liked it. I’m not sure how to respond to your question. Perplexed, I’m afraid.
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Whoa! This is great, my friend! I, too, want more. “You will die looking so.” That line kicked me in the ass. The second person thing really makes this hit the target smack in the center. Great lead-in with that Heinlein quote. Just me, but I vote for a second installment. ~Z
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Maybe a full-run story in the future. I’ll give it some simmer time. Glad you like it!
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We all want more! General clamoring! I especially liked “Untried? Untrue.” That was great.
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Thank you! I’ll probably write a few more with this character. Pondering.
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Is it like a Picture of Dorian Grey? The youthful visage maintained here, but the universe has a way of balancing the books?
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“It is that unspoken surprise the Fell left you with — the seed you carry in your core — that makes you appear unaged.” I’ve seen this before in certain… conditions. Rare. Usually only when someone has encountered a parasitic alien race.
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The parasites are tapeworm-holes!
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Perhaps. Either way, we’ll find out more with the next bit.
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Anyone who tries you will share that seed – oooh! Does that mean that if your character is, say, attacked, the parasite jumps? Splits & jumps? This is good. I hear beers being pounded on the bar for more – drinks and story 🙂
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It’s coming. Well, wine and story. Red at that!
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Chilling!
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Thank you! I am writing another installment.
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Reblogged this on Myths of the Mirror and commented:
A flash piece from Charley that I know you’ll enjoy,
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Thank you!
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Very welcome. A great piece. 🙂
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I’m glad you think so.
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Ooo, freaky, in good way!
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Freaky is fun! I do freaky.
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I really enjoyed the ending!! But as others suggest, I’m also left wanting more.
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More is coming! I’m glad you enjoyed it.
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That is some great writing.
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Thank you!
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Nice! Explicitly science-fiction. Love that!
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I grew up on the ABCs of SciFi — Asimov, Bradbury, and Clarke. I’m glad you liked it. I’m working on the next piece of it.
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Feels like the start of a much bigger story.
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Funny you should say that. I’m in the process of writing the second installment. Glad you liked it!
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Good luck with the writing.
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Thank you!
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Thank you!
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