12 thoughts on “Unseeing Light

  1. Ooo – watercolors and unseeing light – love how the fog bleaches the crows to doves. That works as visual imagery, but also symbolically. Excellent form; the end words are like a poem to themselves. This is so well done! Picture’s cool, too!


  2. Beautiful and well crafted. “Watercolors running / into the unseeing / light” and turning crows into doves leading us to the alchemy of morning works perfectly. The poem brings us into that final fade, but still gives us clarity.


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