Neptune is demanding back royalties;
Wants a comped Maserati GranTurismo
Rome burns with news of the deal
The other Gods inflamed with jealousy
They have a pyro-manic-depressive emperor,
Goes from Nero to Legion at the drop of a toga
It’s all maximum circus now,
Romulus pulls a knife on Remus
You know how cubs can be; wolfing-
down competition in the mything world
Drunk and stumbling down the Appian way
Zeus: “By Jove, I was a Greek God when I was young!”
While Ares is reading a book on Mars
Jupiter’s fowling up the human’s bars
Gods, men and boys,
Tridents of wantonness and toys
Neptune’s drop-top impresses no Nereids;
Arethusa isn’t seeking a Poseidon adventure.
Water Virgins and Juno lawyered up
Another Archaic Triad bites the dust
qbit has taken up the challenge! We are doing a collaborative Renga; alternating couplets. Gods know where we’ll end up. Fasten seat belts!
Yep! I called it! This was a wild, top-down ride, roam’n along the Appian Way (way!). It’s a land of allusions…. How could it not be?
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Rome burns with news of the movie deal
The other Gods enflamed with jealousy
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Got it. I may need to sleep on this.
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K! Here goes:
They have a pyro-manic-depressive emperor
Who goes from Nero to Legion at the drop of a toga
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Hahaha! Sure. BTW, the Maserati Trident royalty thing is great. We gotta find our way back to that.
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Well, there are a lot of switchbacks on Italian roads, I’ve been told. We may see it in passing more than once along the way.
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It’s all maximum circus now,
Romulus pulls a knife on Remus
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Done. No more “movie.” Here’s the next:
You know how cubs can be;
wolfing-down the competition in the mything world
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Way! Way!
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Appian way!
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That’s not a couplet!!! 🙂
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Drunk and stumbling down the Appian way
Zeus the shell of a Greek God.
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Haha! Love it! Working on it.
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“shell” is cliche. I may come back with better language. But keep the image.
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Perhaps. Here’s my next:
While Jupiter read a book on Mars
and went fowling in the human bars
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Hahaha. Working.
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Zeus the Hemingway of a Greek God
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Gods, men and boys,
Their wantoness and toys
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Add an “n” there. “Wantonness”
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So, here’s the set-up:
Neptune’s drop-top impresses no Nereids;
Arethusa isn’t seeking a Poseidon affair.
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Whew!!! OK. Working…
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make “affair” “adventure.”
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Hahahaha!
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Water Virgins and Juno lawyered up
Another Archaic Triad bites the dust
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Here’s the finished product! https://lifeinportofino.wordpress.com/2017/10/24/renga-challenge-maserati-charleyqbit/
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Hahahaha! It’s great! And the picture is picture perfect, lol!
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We play off each other fairly well. Two rabbit dogs off the leash.
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The squirrels hate us.
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Still thinking…
“Their wantonness and toys” s/b “Trident of wantonness and toys”
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“Tridents”
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How about “echo”?
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Hmm… still working on the Zeus line while you set up the final couplets.
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How about “Zeus: “By Jove I was a God when I was young!”
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Ok, OK, this time for sure Zeus: “By Jove I was a Greek God when I was young!”
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BTW, kill “movie” in my first couplet. I think better ambiguous and sounds more sinister.
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*Pulling up a chair*
*Popcorn is popping*
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Mmmm, popcorn!
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It’s spectator popcorn – you are a player, or driver, as the case may be…
well, okay – but don’t take too much. 🙂
(Enjoying the show!)
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Contemplating Ludicrous Mode to get from Nero to Legion in 2.275 seconds…
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Not my post!
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Glad you clarified!
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LOVE the running motifs in this: threes; gods of various ilks; the law. Crazy collaboration, y’all!
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Thank you!
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What a whirlwind of motifs and allusions! Must have been a blast to compose!
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Indeed it was! Two minds working jigsaw with pieces from different puzzles. But I think it came together well.
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I’m glad I had myour seat belt on for this. Well done to you both. What a ride!
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(Pun intended! 🙂 ) Yes, it was fun!
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🙂
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Oh most enjoyable! Loved it.. especially Goes from Nero to Legion at the drop of a toga! That is so clever!
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Thank you! I’m most proud of that. I’m glad you enjoyed the ride!
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Yes, I think the best line.
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You obviously had big fun with this – and it’s as much fun to read. ‘the dropped toga’ line ‘and the Poseidon adventure – had me cackling – thanks both.
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We had a ball doing this. It’s hard work… but, yes, it’s fun!
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Ha, love it, especially Zeus dethroned and saying by Jove… lots of fun
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I’m glad you liked it. Maybe sometime you’ll meet me on the field of poeting!
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Love this! Such an enjoyable read 😀
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I’m so glad!
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I liked this line: “Zeus: “By Jove, I was a Greek God when I was young!””
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Ah, a good one indeed!
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Hahaha! Glad you liked it!
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Quite smooth transitions from one to the other here. Well done, you two!
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Thank you! We both had fun with it – I think that was a good part of it. Glad you enjoyed it.
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Very fun and interesting.
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