We started into spring with a full-blown drought. As we neared the end of the school year I think we were something like nine inches shy of what’s considered normal here. A couple of our mainline roads from the East coast to Orlando were often closed because of dangerously low visibility due to smoke. But Florida is a funny beast. Our rainy season generally begins around May 21st. True to form this year, the rain rolled in… exactly on May 21st… and has only ceased for a few glorious days thus far. As teachers, we look forward to summer. If for no other reason than it’s when we get to turn our sprinkler system off. This afternoon we have faced brooding skies, frog-drowning showers, and – in the near distance – the basso profundo of Thor’s hammer.
Disconcerting flash
Counting out to the rumble
Why aren’t birds hiding?
It’s Haibun Monday at dVerse Poets Pub and Grace, behind the bar, has requested we write about summer. As always, I’m certain I missed the prompt… by this much… but come join us for a summer write on a summer night!
The photo and the video are lovely bookends to your words. The best – “brooding skies, frog-drowning showers” wonderful!
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Aw, thank you, Jill! You are too kind.
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Yes. “Counting out to the rumble”.
One-one-thousand, two-one-thousand. And why *aren’t* the birds hiding?
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Hiding in trees aren’t in their best interests.
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“frog-drowning showers” is a superb phrase.
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Thank you! It was fairly common a long time ago.
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It is not one I have ever heard before 😉
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I get around! 🙂
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🙂
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“Frog-drowning showers!” love it. May Thor look kindly upon you.
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He may, but I’m happily taken! I’m glad you enjoyed it.
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Hey!
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🙂
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I love the ‘ basso profundo of Thor’s hammer’ It’s nice to hear about where other people live.
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I’m glad that worked. I wasn’t certain of it when I wrote it.
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A different view of summer rain than what I am used to in the mid-west, but I wonder what birds do in the rainy weather. Maybe there’s nowhere to go. Nice song by Johnny Rivers to go with this haibun.
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Tstorms down south have a whole different thing going (I know, because I’m from the North Country). They are lazier down here, until they get really riled. Glad you enjoyed it! Not much can beat Johnnny Rivers.
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Ah yes, the daily rain. In South Miami it was 98 degrees and 98 percent humidity. I was a skinny kid then and didn’t care.
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The dark become Seattle-esque eventually.
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Rains are welcome in the summer heat ~ Love your description here:
This afternoon we have faced brooding skies, frog-drowning showers, and – in the near distance – the basso profundo of Thor’s hammer.
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I’m glad it worked. I’ve been uncertain about it.
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So different summer showers than the one we have here. But so good to hear that there’s no more drought. Love the prose particularly
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Thank you!
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We’ve just entered our rainy season but the obstinate summer won’t leave us. Wish me a few thunders and some frog songs from your part of the world. Your haibun is a delight to read. My favorite lines have already been quoted by others.
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Thank you! May the rains bless you.
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basso profundo of Thor’s hammer. – i love your emphasis on strength and power of thunder – my most favourite nature sound! interesting haiku at the end, about the birds
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Thank you!
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I love summer thunderstorms. They are absolutely majestic and awe inspiring. I like the reference to Thor’s hammer!
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Thank you!
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Yeppers. Got to love those frog drowning rains. When we have thuder storms up this way, they are often swift and brutal. But I love the gentle humor in your haibun. And up here, the birds hide!!!!
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Smarter birds than I’m used to! Glad you enjoyed my offering!
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I can always tell when a sudden storm is going to hit – it will get really quiet nd you can’t see or hear the birds. Maybe not smarter, just more weather wise?
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Well, not if they’re hiding in trees.
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“the basso profundo of Thor’s hammer” — what a standout metaphor! I like your haiku, also, especially the closing line.
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Thank you very much!
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