If you can imagine!
If you can image.
We walked through the art museum scrutinizing
exhibits. They spoke in barks, gurgled
unintelligibly, or wisely kept their peace.
The copper shaman danced too slowly
for me to catch the rhythm.
How unlike the world outside
these snippets, these gimcracks that festered
inside studios of inward turning.
What would emerge if the paint was scraped
from the windows, if the curtains were thrown
aside, if the blinds were raised
to the sun, to the contrary Northern Mocking-
bird?
Imagine the artist cast
adrift amongst the mess
of neighbors –
what would it signify?
Is art escape or turmoil?
Oh! That question; that question! Brilliant!
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Thank you, Jill!
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Really liked that. “copper shaman” was a great turn of language.
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Thank you! A fortunate accident!
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I love those fortunate accidents. Some of my best writing.
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My favorite lines:
The copper shaman danced too slowly
for me to catch the rhythm.
How unlike the world outside
these snippets, these gimcracks that festered
inside studios of inward turning.
I picture this in my head as the Shaman dances in a cryptic way of not fully understanding the dance but seeing it slowly and visualizing through its poetic style of intelligible genius. 🙂
My favorite poem of the day. 🙂
I am back! and posted something good for you. 🙂
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I’m on my way… I’m glad you enjoyed it. The copper shaman was a wonderful accident — the best kind of poetry, I guess.
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You always write the best kind of poetry that i love to read from you. Man, I’m glad i read this and look forward to more of your work. 🙂
See you on my blog. 🙂
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I mean what my subtitle says. Poetry requires a certain level of edge of sanity… and beyond.
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It does…poetry always needs that edge and sanity at all costs. A balance of sort.
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It’s a lovely poem. But I’m not sure I understand it completely. So If you would be kind enough to explain a little, that would be great!
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Dissastisfaction at an art gallery. Beyond that you just have to feel whatever reaction (or lack of reaction) you experience.
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That sums it up! Thank you for the reply!
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