And does the mantle
clock truly strike
the hours and count
the minutes of my dreams?
Or does it only while I lie
restless in insomniac torture
keep
faith, extending
the night indefinitely?
What more?
What more to purpose
than to keep
me sleepless, sweating
as the chimes slowly howl
in my ears?
And when the jazz comes
alive in my ears
at ten past five,
should I curse
the clock for making
noise?
Or praise
it for keeping
time and tempo
to the nightmare
of my unrelenting
sleepless nights?
It’s open link night at dVerse Poets Pub, which is to say, “Anything goes!” It can be a wild ride into poetic darkness and at the same time into the brightest of sunrises, supernovas, or simple flash photography (retro style with a Kodak Instamatic and those awesome flash cubes of yore!). https://dversepoets.com/2017/05/04/openlinknight-195/
Fabulous pace in this poem of movement at a time when there should be no movement. Insomniac torture – a precise turn of phrase that we all connect with at times. This is wonderfully written!
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Thank you! I write what I so seldom experience… but imagine.
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Well (yawn!) if you don’t experience this much, then you are a better man than I. Er, um… yeah.
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Um, yeah! 🙂
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I love this and know this, as in the torture of the alarm waking me from the ‘at last(!)’ I have finally fallen asleep.
It reminds me too of nights spent in hospital when sleep seems elusive and the clock slows in its beat, making the night seem eternal.
Anna :o]
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Indeed. A night spent under the artistic direction of Hitchcock. Glad you enjoyed it!
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Or does it only while I lie
restless in insomniac torture
keep
faith, extending
the night indefinitely?…. love this.
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I’m so glad!
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Written like a true insomniac! Tick and chime … tick and chime … tick and chime
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And yet I sleep well most nights! I’m happy you enjoyed it.
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The measure of time is most painful when waiting or during insomnia… I know that when I sleep time is gone.
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Usually more quickly than when we’re awake!
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I used to have a clock that I could hear ticking at night when I couldn’t sleep. It can be annoying. Dreams seem timeless to me although they might take some time for dream awareness to occur.
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Exactly!
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I’m a chronic insomniac. But I try not to lose any sleep over it! I know the torture you describe, Charley. You nailed it, Buddy!
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Sleepwalked through this one, Walt. It wrote like a dream. 🙂
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Dream On, Brother! It works for you!
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I hat that ticking clock when I can’t sleep ~ Blissfully I don’t have too many now & time just skips merrily away ~ Thanks for joining us ~
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Yeah, this was purely from imagination. I sleep long and well. Okay, not long enough, but well! Glad you enjoyed it.
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Kill the clock. It’s always hard to sleep when you know you have to rise early.
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Actually… I seldom hear the clock in an active way. Even when I’m awake… and in the same room with it!
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You get used to the sound
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I can never sleep with the alarm on.. it drives me insane to know the hours are slipping away..
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