photo by Charley
Copyright 2016 Charley (Life In Portofino)
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Pre-Dawn Pottery
Life in Portofino
Great poets live on the edge of sanity; mediocre ones reside in the suburbs.
photo by Charley
Copyright 2016 Charley (Life In Portofino)
So many cool things in this poem, Charley! The visual of the stairs draws the eye down the steps with you. The play on pottery and your pottering mind is charming! There is a stillness about the poem, both in words and structure, that reflect the subject – well done 🙂 One last thought — the end words are very strong, leaving images of the turning potter’s wheel. Bravo!
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Thank you, Jilly! I always appreciate your feedback, because you head into the poetics. I’m glad you enjoyed my offering… and from what you’ve said, I succeeded!
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