“I read in a book once that a rose by any other name would smell as sweet, but I’ve never been able to believe it. I don’t believe a rose WOULD be as nice if it was called a thistle or a skunk cabbage.” ― L.M. Montgomery, Anne of Green Gables
“It ain’t what they call you, it’s what you answer to.” ― W.C. Fields
I start
my part
my frame
that name
Ten years
fed fears
felt caged
thoughts raged
New home, new school, new friends…
New name!
Mom wars
heart sores
life split
(think o’it!)
Long fight
spell right
Charley
that’s me
Last name still trips many….
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dVerse – Poets Pub
I am who I am, but tomorrow, who knows?
Lillian, our barkeep tonight, posted, “For today’s Quadrille (a poem of 44 words: no more, no less – not including the title), create a self-portrait. Perhaps it will be a snapshot of you in some moment of time. Or a taste of your tastes. Or a glimpse into the conglomeration of you — are we perhaps the ultimate nesting doll? Many of us post photos or images with our poems so in this instance, it could be a recent photo; a photo taken in your sepia days; a picture of something you cherish that in essence tells us who you are; an abstract drawing or a flower or animal or color that you ascribe to yourself. Try to make the image complementary to your words.
So, think about it for a while. Who are you? No one word to include in this prompt….just asking you to create some type of self-portrait that you’re comfortable sharing. Let your words be your palette and make broad or fine brush strokes as you wish. You’re the artist here!”
Charley, I love the look of this visually! I like how this line: New home, new school, new friends… Gives birth to what seems a coming-of-age moment. Something about our personality that likes his/her name spelled right – just doesn’t feel like you if it’s spelled wrong (I’m guessing). I completely understand that!
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Yes, the spelling of my first name is part of that picture. But it’s really about changing my name — against my mother’s will — when we were checking into a new school. Life-long battle ensued. The naming of things (including cats) “is a difficult matter, It isn’t just one of your holiday games….” I became a horse of a different color when I became a “Charley!” Glad you enjoyed my bio-poem!
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Did she call you by your middle name and you insisted on your first name or did you legally change your name?
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The former.
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ok thanks for the clarification 😉
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Perfection of poetry rhyme and very different style of writing.
I am thinking of trying this type of style later on.
Is this a dVerse challenge?
Well, done my friend.
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Yes, it is. And please do! Glad you enjoyed it!
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I enjoyed it very much. I’m going to be creative at this. 🙂
P.S Got a new poem posted. Check it out. 🙂
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Will do!
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Well…have to say I LOVE the Mouseketeer shot! I was a card carrying ear wearing member in those early days. Loved Darleen and Spin and Marty! 😊 We are kindred souls my friend. Always “Lillian”, my parents dropped me off at college and the first person I met I said “My name’s Lill!” Just last year, when I took up writing, I went back to Lillian. Great cameo of you here!
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Thank you! I always liked Karen… became a Carpenter, if I’m not mistaken. 🙂 Glad you enjoyed my mousing around!
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agreed you are what you answer too…nice spin on your self identity… we each know who we are you are Charley…bkm
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thank you for getting it right! Glad you stopped by my humble blog.
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Charley (did I spell it correctly? tee hee! ) I love the staccato quality to the style and word choices – it plays well with the battle theme of the poem. Your writing is always so very creative – thank you for sharing!
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Thank you, Jilly! You spelled it exactly right!
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I started out as Wally and dad was Walter. as we both aged, I grew tired of the name. I demanded to be called Walter, and Dad always said, “Call me Wally!” What’s in a name besides a bunch of letters spelling who you aspire to be! Playful romp here, Charley!
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Thank you, Walter! I realize I too often write Walt. Not disrespect, just plain laziness.
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I adore Anne of Green Gables. 🙂
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I liked the take on Shake!
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I like this take on the prompt. Well done.
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Thank you!
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Love the mousketeers memory in the photo and the W.C. Fields quote. Everything about this speaks of what I can guess about you. I had to think about “fed fears” vs. Fed fears. Took me a few minutes to sort that out. :0)
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Who says I didn’t mean both: fed and Fed. (Cue evil laughter) Glad you enjoyed it!
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Aha. I knew it!
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Love the photo and response Charley. Good for you to have a new surroundings and a fresh start and a new name.
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Amazingly, that still fits. Life started anew about eleven years ago, and is much better than anything I would have believed! Glad you liked my poem!
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You showed a strong side to your personality here, Charley, and I’m glad you had the tenacity to fight for what you wanted. Our names do have an impact on us and how the world perceives us. Good for you!
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Thank you! And thank you!
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You made me remember the Mouseketeers that I loved watching after school every day………….I enjoyed this visit!
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Glad you enjoyed it! Glad you stopped by my blog. I’m a little behind in reading, but I’ll stop by yours soon.
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Now I’m curious what your middle name is. 😉
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To paraphrase a line from The Princess Bride movie, “Get used to disappointment!” 😛 But seriously, it’s–
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you are courageous, battling with mama at that age and winning…wowzers…the poem looks and reads like a home, two storyed, the ground floor looks strong 🙂
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Thank you for responding to the poetics! I hadn’t consciously done that; but I see it now that you mentioned it. I didn’t win decisively with my mom until her last year. That’s where I inherited my… um, stick-to-it-tive-ness. Yeah… that’s what it’s called! 🙂
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The style of this write is attractive. Succinct yet a life story.
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Thank you! It’s at least one aspect… and certainly one I didn’t mind sharing.
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I can relate. I was a 50’s baby and I guess a lot of Mom’s were enamored of Debbie Reynolds cause there were lots of Debbys my age. I felt a bit ‘common’ so started writing my name Debi just to be different.
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Well, my form of Charley actually came as a compromise… which did nothing to appease my mom or my family. I’m glad you enjoyed my poem… and I’m glad you became yourself!
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A whole life (so far) squeezed into 44 words. Well done! And I loved the photos!
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Thank you! I can only take credit for the one photo. Never a Mouseketeer, alas!
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I like the format of this poem. I have a similar thing with “Sara.” Many people automatically spell it with an ‘h’ at the end. It’s just not me! The photo was precious!
Thanks for the follow.
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You’re welcome!
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Love the right short rhymes in this…but I am left wondering about your middle name… 🙂
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Very nice and of course now I am dying to know your cursed middle name 😀
Not that I’d use it…
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I’ve been using a response from The Princess Bride to all requests to know it. “Get used to disappointment.” 🙂
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As if the “new home, new school, new friends” wasn’t enough!
There were 4 Michelles in my 1st grade elementary class. The teacher insisted that at least 2 of us use another name (what?!) ..any nickname we could come up with. I was stuck with “Shelly” for years. I remember having to convince my high school friends it was not really my name.
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That couldn’t have been fun!
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