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One summer’s night
when I was twelve
or fourteen or more
I lay in bed uncovered
a window fan blowing
hot, steaming summer
air across my steaming
self.
Remembering winter’s
uncivilized arctic blast
did not bring consolation
but a resolve of two far
off but necessary lifestyle
changes:
Move south.
Have air conditioning.
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dVerse – Poets Pub
Tuesday Poetics: Summer Starter
In honor of the Solstice, we have been challenged to write a Summer poem.
We are to use another writer’s poem – a word, a line – as an igniter (my word)
to get us going, poetically speaking. Come join us! Bring picnic food to pass.
https://dversepoets.com/2016/06/21/tuesday-poetics-summer-starter/
http://www.bustle.com/articles/40773-11-of-shel-silversteins-most-weird-and-wonderful-poems
Love Silverstein and your extention is great, Charley. An endearing poem wonder fully done.
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Glad you enjoyed it, Walt!
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YES!!! Somebody broke out the Shel! LOVE.It.
And love your reprise. Good stuff, Charley. You always make me smile.
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And I’m actually trying to become a serious poet! Oh, well! I’m glad you enjoyed it, and Shel!
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This was wonderful… Yes heat can be hard when you don’t have AC
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Glad you enjoyed it, Bjorn!
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You made me smile!
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I seem to do that a lot. But then, I grew up soaking in the works of people who played with words… sometimes until they broke them. Glad you stopped by for a smile!
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Love your take on the prompt 😀 beautifully done.
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Thank you!
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terrifically terse for who can be verbose in heat?!
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Faulkner. Glad you enjoyed it!
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Shel Silverstein is a favourite of mine and your poem is great fun.
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I had fun writing it. Glad you had fun reading it!
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Nice pair of poems – seems like everybody knows Shel Silverstein except for me. I love your response. Made me smile.
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Not know the perpetrator of “A Boy Named Sue!” I gasp. 🙂 Worth a look. Thank you for stopping by!
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Now I am hanging my head in shame. Looks like I have a poet to look up…
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Nah. He’s an alternative to giving a Dr. Seuss book to high school graduates. But he is fun, light reading.
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Great image of the ineffective fan. Been there 🙂
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There are still people who survive without AC. Thankfully, I’m not one of them. Took me twenty minutes to get the sheets unstuck….
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Made me smile! We are never satisfied 🙂
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I am now. Florida and AC! Glad I could make you smile!
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Your last stanza made me chuckle. And I love your Shel Silverstein muse.
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Part Shel, part Groucho, mostly Bullwinkle. Thank you! Glad you enjoyed it!
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Here’s another not familiar with Shel. But…hot as you are, move south? LOL, sounds like moving closer to hell to me. Nice fun poem and I related to it totally.
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Nah! Hell was shoveling and trying to talk up “winter sports!” Shivering is not a sport! I love it where I am; wouldn’t have it any other way. Glad you understand my craziness!
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Cool. I was wondering about that moving south!
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Laughing at your comment “shivering is not a sport”. I think it might be in Canadian winters. We should start a league here..haha. I enjoy the change of seasons…and so appreciating our warm temps right now.
Fun poem, Charley. 🙂
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Very well done! Silverstein is a favorite.
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Thank you! Glad you enjoyed my interplay with one of the more playful word wrights.
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Oh manys the days I spent reading Shel Silverstein with my kids! Love his work and books. Fun take on the prompt! 🙂
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Thank you! Shel has been in and out of my life. Mostly in. Glad you liked my effort!
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