Butterfly wings lightly flutter across my lashes. Furtively peeking around our bedroom curtains. Whispering me awake and then blushing the sky over her brazenness. Lightening the mood as she lifts me out of my gilded slumbers.
Some mornings she arrives fully robed, shades drawn. No show to speak of; total washout. Other mornings she comes naked as a newborn. All flash and there you have it! But when she dances with many veils, wow, what a show!
Here comes the sun
mockingbird’s, not beetle’s song
burlesque dancer, dawn.
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dVerse: Poet’s Pub
Haibun Monday #15 All Things Quotidian
Oh my, but that rising sun is a sultry thing!
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Gets hot in Florida early in the morning!
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How wonderful. The sunrise as a burlesque dancer. Never thought of it like that but there ya go! How much fun is this?
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Cue the music! Pour the coffee!
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Burlesque dancer sun! I love that.
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Thank you! It’s hard to find an original thought about sunrise. It’s a well-mined poetic event. I’m glad you enjoyed it.
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Lovely image of the morning sun dancing with many veils…
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The earth and sky is as close to TV as we get here. The programming is much better! Glad you enjoyed it.
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I love the way the sounds bump and grind in your haiku, Charlie. What a dance.
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Sorry. Meant Charley, obviously.
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That’s okay. They both sound the same. But thank you!
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The sun and her dancing in the mornings! A deity indeed. Loved this piece.
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I prefer it to the old guy with the chariot. Cleaning up after those horses… I’m glad you liked it!
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🙂
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Smiling I am…..burlesque by the sun! Love it!
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Dance of a thousand veils. More in Seattle and Portland!
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Like this. The sun is still wrapped up in an overcoat here, today, but I have hopes she’ll be flashing herself a bit soon.
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Prurient sun worshipers!
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Nice description of the magical moment of sunrise. Sensual in many ways.
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Too many people argue the glories of sunrise over sunset and vice versa. It’s simple, one is the early matinee, and the other is the finale. No two shows alike. Guaranteed. Sensual to be sure — but not base! Glad you enjoyed it!
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Good thinking. And definitely not base. Tasteful.
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